1. notleia says:

    +1 for the spoof

    But somehow the excerpt made me doubt that text was the appropriate medium for most of what put down. Text is impressionistic, not photographic. The good bits for text are the parts about the resemblances, but the rest of it seems to be too much description for too little emotional payoff.
    Graphic novel might allow for better scope of what you’re trying to capture, but probably the best would be animation. I’m imagining some kind of Neon Genesis Evangelion freaky weird stuff while Beethoven plays in the background.

    I think I’d be better able to tell stories in graphic novel form, but I do not haz art talent, sadface.

What do you think?