The Sound and the Fury

How has heavy metal music influenced my writing?
on Aug 21, 2019 · 8 comments

I came across this article that I wrote a number of years ago on my blog and thought it had some interesting insights. Most of my books have a “heavy metal” feel to them, a direct result of listening to metal music nonstop since I was a teenager. Although my musical tastes and my writing style has changed over the past couple of years, I figure that a lot of readers and writers on this website are heavy metal fans and if you’re one of them, I hope you can relate.

How exactly does heavy metal influence my writing?

1. Metal is loud, bombastic, and aggressive.

That’s not to say that there aren’t subtleties and nuances to be found in the hurricane of power chords, thunderous guitar riffs, light-speed double bass drumming, and ferocious vocals, but one defining characteristic is its sheer massive power. Metal music is not tame or shy or weak. It’s not vulnerable or overly-sensitive. Metal music is overt, in-your-face, and above all, empowering. It’s not music to make you search your soul for the source of your misery; it’s a jackhammer for you to blast your misery into tiny fragments, and then take said jackhammer and destroy every piece of furniture in your living room.

I strive to incorporate this brash aggression into my writing. Writing a novel is a more delicate process than bellowing a heavy metal anthem, but it doesn’t mean it has to be limp-wristed and timid. My writing is often violent (physically or emotionally) and I intend for it to be a challenge to the reader. Metal isn’t easy listening, and I don’t want my books to be either.

2. Metal is dark and cynical.

Heavy metal won’t give you the warm and fuzzies. It’s not music to set a romantic mood or soothe your soul at the end of a long hard day (although it can be cathartic when you feel like you want to break someone’s head after sitting in traffic for three hours). The lyrics often deal with dark, negative themes, and you won’t find comfort or resolution in the crushing chords of a metal song. There have been moments when I’ve listened to an epic metal opus and I could feel my heart literally wither inside my chest. Metal can be majestic and soaring at times, but even these songs have a hint of menace in them. That’s just the nature or metal music – heaviness is essential, and heavy = dark. The same can be said for the subject matter: anger, disillusionment, challenging authority, struggle, and war. Not exactly the stuff of lullabies and love ballads.

In my own writing, I don’t want the reader to feel comfortable. I incorporate some elements for shock value, but I want the book itself to be a challenging experience. To accomplish this, I include unlikeable characters, disturbing themes, and epic struggles that don’t always turn out all right in the end. My books aren’t necessarily depressive and bleak, but they won’t make you feel like whistling a happy tune as you skip down the street.
3. Metal takes pride in being outside the mainstream.

The metal movement is massive, with tens of millions of fans all over the world. Yet is is largely maligned by popular society. This is part of the draw of heavy metal. People who feel like they are on the fringes of mainstream society are drawn to metal music for the very reason that it too is stereotyped and dismissed by the masses. In recent years, metal music has become more acceptable in mainstream society but this is only in limited amounts. The majority of metal music is underground because most people simply can’t handle it. It will never be “popular” and that’s what it wants. Metal music wants to be respected but it doesn’t want to be a part of normal society. It wears its counterculture badge with pride.

I know the subjects that I write about will also likely never be popular. Of course I would like be a successful author, but I have to be true to my imagination. The stories in my head that are clamoring to be written are not about topics and themes that most people would like to read about, but that doesn’t mean I’m going to water down my writing to appeal to the mainstream. I want to be the best writer I can be, and if my writing is truly good enough, it will be recognized regardless of theme and subject matter. But until then, I must content myself to be on the fringes of the mainstream book world. This is the path that I have chosen, and I have to accept any struggle that comes with it.

Regardless of whether I become a bestseller or remain in the underground, I will keep on rocking. This is the attitude of true metal music and my attitude when I write. You can either take it for what it is or walk away, but don’t expect it to change to suit your delicate sensibilities.

Mark Carver writes dark, edgy books that tackle tough spiritual issues. He is currently working on his ninth novel. Besides writing, Mark is passionate about art, tattoos, bluegrass music, and medieval architecture. After spending more than eight years in China, he now lives with his wife and three children in Atlanta, GA. You can find Mark online at and at Markcarverbooks on Facebook.
  1. I am a sixty-something, white-haired grandmother who loves Christian Heavy Metal and writes Christian Epic Fantasy with (sometimes) dark themes. I have shocked people when they learn what I do and read my books. That’s fine with me. And … I write best when listening to loud, non-wimpy music. It fuels my imagination. Thanks for sharing your perspective.

  2. I listen to a variety of things, and am often not clear of the genre. Some of it is metal, though maybe not heavy metal. I think Red, Breaking Benjamin and Three Days Grace are usually the heaviest I listen to.

    Most of the songs I like have a touch of anger, angst, tragedy, or a hint at some negative aspect of life, even if they sound happy and upbeat at first. Like…Blue, by Marina and the Diamonds. At first I wasn’t paying much attention to the lyrics and just interpreted it as her having a hard time letting go of her ex. But, listening more closely, it actually sounds like she doesn’t care much about the guy she keeps coming back to, and is just using him to make herself feel better emotionally. Rather cruddy of her, but it shows that songs aren’t positive just because they sound upbeat.

    But angsty music, or music that reveals the more uncomfortable parts of human nature is excellent story fuel. It’s sort of hard to find good songs that don’t mention even a hint of challenge or anger or sadness in them, though. I don’t even necessarily think people should be expected to, so long as they make sure they aren’t letting their listening influence them badly.

  3. Plini, Arch Echo, Intervals, Snarky Puppy (though that’s more jazz), Periphery, Oh Sleeper, Silent Planet, Architects, Animals as Leaders – that’s some of my go-to “writing music.” On the non-metal side, TPR’s Melancholy video game tribute soundtracks are fantabulous.

    But even if you’re not into metal, everyone should look up Plini, Arch Echo, and Snarky Puppy. You’re welcome in advance.

    • Have you heard of Globus? From what I understand they have at least some elements of metal in their music. Some of it could be good writing listening for you perhaps. My favorites by them are Orchard of Mines and Sarabande Suite (Aeternae)(That song starts out kinda slow, but gets way more epic as it goes along)

  4. notleia says:

    Dance party in the comments! I offer Mongolian folk(?) metal, which is a kinda baffling thing to exist, but I’m sold on it.

  5. Going to actually link music now that I’m back on my pc again. This is some of the stuff I’ve been listening to that’s inspired my current WIP. Not really metal, but yeah:

    And, this one’s from Starset. They have quite a few songs I like:

    And, this has nothing to do with my current WIP, but I’m including it because it’s a pretty good indie song that deserves some attention:

What do you think?