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Last Son Of Earth – Part 6

I’d like to start by thanking everyone for your wonderful comments last week. You’ve given me much to ponder and I think I may have to go back and alter a couple of the chapters this week. I’m glad that […]
Christopher Miller on Jun 11, 2013 · Series: Last Son of Earth
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I’d like to start by thanking everyone for your wonderful comments last week. You’ve given me much to ponder and I think I may have to go back and alter a couple of the chapters this week. I’m glad that Tin-Man was so well received. I like the idea of changing the world a bit so that every home has a android butler of some kind…but that Tin-Man was altered by Alden in some way. Do you all agree? Or do you think I should leave him as he currently is (a remnant of a technologically advanced past)? Vote by posting your comments below.

This is my first attempt at “Seat of Your Pants” writing, so I appreciate your feedback as I go. It’s fun…and frightening at the same time.

For those of you who haven’t been following along with our story to date, it’s best to start from the beginning and work your way up to this post today.

Enjoy.

Prologue – The Parting

Chapter 1 – The Gulf

Chapter 2 – One of Them (Part 1)

Chapter 2 – One of Them (Part 2)

Chapter 3 – Another Night in Steel City

And now…Chapter 4 – Hope in the Stars

Cilla pushed the crude door to her father’s study gently open and tip toed into the candle lit room with all the curiosity of a 12 year old. It was a cluttered space, piles of books stacked precariously atop each other spotted the uneven stone floor. Heaps of crumpled paper were scattered in the corners. She moved around them with carefully placed steps until she turned a short corner and spotted her father hunched over his drafting table across the room.

It was late and he was so engrossed in his work that he hadn’t heard her enter the cave. He was a wiry man, with untamed hair and oversized spectacles. He cared little for appearances – he was a man of ideas and his ideas were important to the survival of the Restoration.

Cilla loved to watch her daddy’s imagination take shape on paper. He was working on something wonderful, she could tell, though what exactly was hard to tell from where she currently stood. She took another step forward so that her father’s form no longer blocked her view. His pencil slid along a straight edge, making a carefully measured mark across what seemed to be some kind of silo shaped object.

“What are you doing up so late, princess?” her father asked without looking up from his work.

Cilla froze for a moment, surprised that he had heard her.

“Couldn’t sleep,” she said, quietly. “What are you working on, Dad?”

“Why don’t you come over and tell me what you think it is,” he offered kindly. Cilla strode across the room, her nightgown and pigtails swooshing out behind her. She leaned up alongside her father and took a better look at his latest creation.

It was like nothing she had ever seen before. A tall, cylindrical object with a pointed top. It had angular fins near the base and a dozen, smaller crayon-like cylinders wrapped around the middle like a belt of some kind. In the interior of the cylinder, near the top, she could make out a few human figures as reference standing on some sort of platform. If the scale was correct, the structure was just over 30 meters tall and nearly 10 meters wide.

“That’s a strange looking home,” she said.

Her father chuckled.

“It is indeed,” he said. “But it isn’t just a home its a transport.”

“A moving home?” She asked.

The man nodded.

Cilla scrunched up her nose and looked back to the drawing.

“How does it move? I don’t see any wheels.”

“It won’t need wheels. This transport was meant to fly.”

At this Cilla snorted.

“Don’t be silly.”

“It will,” her father insisted. “There are dozens like it. They will take us away from this place – further than anyone has gone before.”

“How far?” she asked with wide-eyed anticipation.

“To the stars, I hope.” He said in return. Cilla looked confused and so he explained. “There is another world out there, Cilla. One very much like our own, but nothing like it at all.”

“How do you know?”

“There are books in the archives that mention it. Men have been there – before the Dark Age destroyed everything. Before CON. Here…look.”

At this, he opened a book which had been lying on the desk beside him and handed it to Cilla. The drawings inside were unbelievable. Towering trees rose high over a thick flowering underbrush where pools and waterfalls spilled one into another. It seemed to Cilla like something out of the fairy tales she had read about in the books her father kept. She glanced back at the drawing board and frowned. The transport didn’t look much like a thing that could accomplish anything near what her father had just claimed it could. Even so, she had never known her father to be a liar.

Her father continued. “Imagine it, Cilla, a world untouched by the iron fist of CON. A world in which we can finally live in the open, free from fear. No more hiding in the darkness. No more scavenging underground. It will be a new beginning, for all of us.”

“It seems too wonderful to even hope for. When?” she asked.

“Soon enough.” He answered simply. “It will take quite some time to build, of course.”

It was only then that Cilla noticed a mark in the upper corner of the paper she had not seen before. It was the Cockatrice – the symbol of CON.

“What is that doing up there?” She demanded.

Her father lowered his eyebrows. He had hoped she wouldn’t notice it.

“It is the sponsor’s mark.”

“You mean CON knows of this world too?”

He nodded.

“But CON hates us. Why would they…or you, even consider…”

“Now, now, Cilla,” he said firmly, “Do you think me a fool?”

“Of course not, father,” she answered, suddenly ashamed of herself for speaking out. “I’m sorry, I just don’t understand why we would work with…the enemy.”

“It’s all worked out. CON is not to know that I am designing it. A sympathizer on the inside is allowing me to retrofit the vessel design for our purposes in secret.”

“But surely they will find out. And if they do…”

“They mustn’t,” he said, staring deeply into her golden-brown eyes. “Which is why you must promise me you will forget the whole thing. Mention nothing of it to anyone, do you hear? There are far too many lives at stake. We can’t afford to trust anyone.”

Cilla nodded, her eyes welling up with tears.

“I’m tired of running, father.” She said. “When will it end.”

Her father took her in his arms and held her close. “It will be okay,” he said, comforting her. “I cannot help but think this new world was meant for us, Cilla. After all, the maker of the stars did not lead us to it for nothing. Pray, my little princess. It is our only hope of escape.”

And so, in the deep underground, they lifted their eyes toward the heavens and put their hope in their God, in the distant home and the tiny vessel that one day might take them to freedom.

Christopher Miller
Story matters. As the balder half of the Miller Brothers writing duo, Christopher is convinced that his receding hairline is actually a solar panel for brilliant thought. While the science behind this phenomenon is sketchy (at best) one thing is undeniable – his mind is a veritable greenhouse of crazy story ideas. Oh, he's also the co-author of three award-winning youth fiction novels (The Miller Brothers) and newly released novel based on a video game and a pair of children's books. Their books are written for kids and adults who aren't afraid of adventure. His hobbies include dating his wife, raising three children and providing for his family through copywriting, web design and launching a free to read platform for novelists called BookJolt.com. One day, Chris and his brother hope to delve deeply into the realm of interactive fiction.
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  1. Bladebearer says:
    June 11, 2013 at 4:48 pm

    I like this, but I’m confused about the running and hiding. Maybe an explanation of what happens if they are caught?

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  2. Literaturelady says:
    June 11, 2013 at 5:01 pm

    Wow.  This got me further intrigued in the story (doing dishes isn’t that important, is it?), and this is very good for seat-of-the-pants writing!  Hmmm, methinks CON and the Restorers will have fight for domination of this new planet (or the old one.  I assumed the story started out on planet earth, but perhaps not…)
     
    Oh, and I didn’t pick up hints of “reassigning” here…these two characters seem like true father and daughter.
     
    I got confused about Cilla’s age.  The phrase “with all the curiosity of a 12 year old” made me think she was older, but with childlike curiosity.  Or maybe I just assumed she was 16 like Alden.
     
    Keep up the good work!
    Blessings,
    Literaturelady
     
    P.S. About the Tin Man…I like the idea of a tinkered android butler best.  But wouldn’t Alden’s “Mom” know that he had been messing with the android?  Unless she never used him in the first place.

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  3. Galadriel says:
    June 12, 2013 at 9:47 pm

    Oh, I  like these characters

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  4. Leanna says:
    June 12, 2013 at 11:04 pm

    Thanks for replying to last week’s comment. 🙂
    I like Tin-Man being an altered household butler.
     
    It doesn’t feel like quite the right timing to me to switch POV. I’d suggest there being one more chapter at least with Alden before jumping to Cilla and her father.
    Originally in the scene, I was wondering if the father might be Alden’s father but that doesn’t really work if he is working that closely to CON (how could they not know who the lead designer of a super-expensive ship was?). Unless the sympathizer is the CON-appointed lead of the program… But then did the father have Cilla with a different woman? …I’m over thinking this rabbit trail. 😛

    Cilla’s maturity seems to vacillate. Some of her thoughts, particularly the bit about the structure being so many meters wide according to scale, didn’t mesh with her words. Much of the dialogue throughout the scene didn’t read as authentic to me.
    Why would he freely let her look at the schematic and explain what its purpose was only to tell her at the end to forget everything because it was dangerous for her to know it? Plus, if they are in hiding, who is she going to tell anyway?
     
    I don’t know what you have planned regarding Cilla’s character but I like the idea of her being a precocious nosy child (but socially awkward since she’s rarely been around other people).

    Random: did remnants of Disney survive the Dark Age? Without medieval history or fairy tales, the term princess probably wouldn’t stick around.
     
    Overall, I really like what this chapter adds to the story (especially since it means the story is inclining towards space travel!). 😉

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  5. Henrietta Frankensee says:
    June 13, 2013 at 11:12 pm

    Ah!  This is quite a leap. 
    A love interest for Alden.  Even if it is his sister….Abraham married his half sister…. Luke escaped by a Wookie’s whisker. 
    A space journey doomed to fail – a way for CON to rid the world of rebels (sponsor a journey in defective vessels that in the end reach their destination because of Alden). 
    The Lord sponsoring Alden might be the anonymous sponsor here, supporting the theory he is Alden’s father.  Seeking to help the rebels and his son….  Or he is the grandfather/uncle to Alden and Cilla….
    I do not object to Cilla’s immaturity in comparison to present day 12 year olds, however she would not be interested in measurements.  And they would use different units, perhaps something relating to human dimensions to be translatable by today’s reader. 
    As to the term ‘princess’, she existed long before Walt Disney revived Grimm and I look forward to her continued thriving in many, many more contexts and plots and configurations apart from the imaginations of the Disney corporation.   
     
     
     

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    • Leanna says:
      June 14, 2013 at 11:44 am

      The Disney bit was a joke. 😉
      I only meant without connection to history (which is generally the case in dystopias) and no current royalty, how could the term princess exist?
       
      In contrast, I don’t see any reason why they can’t use the metric system in this world. The concept of measuring will always exist, why not use basic English terms rather than inventing new ones?

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