Observations Of A Youngling: The Business Of Evangelism

So, this time I promised to discuss conversion arcs. This one makes me a little nervous because it’s not so much that I think conversions are a problem as much as how they’re typically handled.  For starters, most people don’t […]
on Oct 13, 2010 · Off

So, this time I promised to discuss conversion arcs. This one makes me a little nervous because it’s not so much that I think conversions are a problem as much as how they’re typically handled.  For starters, most people don’t actually mind conversion stories. Star Wars Episodes I-III are the account of a boy who  is offered the Light Side of the Force and ultimately rejects it for the Dark Side. Episodes IV-VI follow the conversion and maturation of Luke Skywalker to and in the Light Side of the Force and adds in the unexpected redemption of Darth Vader. The Last Samurai contains the conversion of the main character to the samurai way of life. The Matrix is the transformation of Neo from slave to redeemer. Beauty and the Beast: an arrogant prince to a humble king. I didn’t see Avatar, but you get the point.

Conversions are simply stepping into a new life and dying to the old one.

So on the whole, I don’t think anyone really minds these transformation stories. Really, we kinda like them. We’re wired for them.

So, of course, once again, I think cliché altar-calls are but a symptom of a bigger issue.

The original discussion with Stephen went as follows:

Stephen: And while I’m on it, can we also not have so many stories that endlessly fixate on non-Christian characters, and push them toward making a Leap of Faith? I’d love to see more storytellers showing, not telling, how mature Christians — struggles and all — “best” (if that is a “best”) handle their life crises.

Me: I haven’t read many of these lately, but (and this is going to sound funny, maybe) I sort of think of it the way I do kissing scenes in movies (chick-flick hater, btw): If its appropriate to the story, it’s fair game. If it’s appropriate to the situation, it’s fair game. But when the guy has amnesia and is being chased by the CIA and neither of you is sure if he’s a good guy or bad guy after 8 hrs in a car, maybe making out while making your disguise (because you’re running for your life) isn’t a good time. ::cough::Bourne::cough::

Now I’m ranting, so I’ll call it quits for the time being. 0=) Now that we’ve covered a list of personal peeves. Hehe. Apologies for that.

Just as those “romantic arcs” (that’s another discussion entirely) are only appropriate if time, situation, and setting allow for it, so those conversion experiences are only appropriate if time, situation, and setting allow for it. People don’t go from “I might kill you” to “I love you” that fast ::cough::Underworld & Luke & Mara Jade:: and, not that I’m an expert on the subject, but I have yet to hear of that many people who go from either “God doesn’t exist” or “I hate God” to “Okay, now I love him and I’m going to turn my life–heart, soul, mind, and strength–to him that fast.

Okay, so, provided Jesus didn’t knock you off your horse, blind you, and openly confront you for persecuting him. You know.

As I’ve said before, I really didn’t know any such ABA/CBA divide existed until my first writers’ conference as a high school senior. And as a result, I suppose I see most of the arguments as comparable to issues in the Bible Belt regardless.

More or less, I’m left with a few questions.

1. Who is the CBA audience?

I ask this one because I think on the whole Christians (especially when we’re dealing with church structures) tend to either lean toward two groups of people:

  • Non-Christians and/or “infant” believers
  • “Teenage” or more mature believers (I’m using the life cycle loosely, take it for what it is)

Occasionally you’ll see a church try to appeal to both parties: I tend to prefer these middle-roaders, but even they are going to lean slightly more one way than the other. It’s natural, I suppose. And there’s nothing truly wrong with it. As Christians we’re called to edify, exhort, and encourage the body of believers, and we’re spread the hope of the gospel and make disciples of all men. So, whatever we do, we are to present Christ in all things.

But here’s the thing: If the majority of CBA readers are Christians, I do not know why a conversion arc  is necessary. Yes, it’s affirmative. But this is milk for a grown man who needs meat (or, for our purposes, a hungry teenager, at the very least). You wind up creating an entire argument for people who already believe what you’re saying is true.   So what you’re winding up with is a book for someone unfamiliar with the gospel given to someone who already knows it.   The very audience you intend to reach is never going to see it, most likely. I just don’t know that many non-Christians who find reason to go into a Christian bookstore or visit the religious fiction (Re: Christian fiction) section.

2. What is the purpose of CBA?

There are two types of ministry: Outreach (geared toward non-believers) and “inreach” (geared toward believers).  One thing I tend to harp on in church circles is that it’s perfectly fine to have an event geared toward one or the other, however, you must be honest about it. Don’t advertise an event as a great way for the youth group to get “close to God” and then gear everything toward an altar call or tell the kids to bring all their non-Christian friends. It’s not that said friends can’t come. It’s that you’re playing this game where you’re pretending to do evangelism when you’re really doing  ::gasp:: discipleship.

If CBA’s purpose is to edify the body, then it needs to think in terms of the edification of the body, not in terms of evangelizing some hypothetical non-believer who may or may not be duped into  the religious fiction section of Barnes & Noble.

But if CBA’s purpose is to preach the gospel, I’m really wondering how it intends to do that, because I’m not sure the current M.O. is fruitful. Of course, I’m not exactly known for having the spiritual gift of evangelism, either, so it may not be my place to criticize the point.

Moreover, another picky point of mine in church is that there is a time and place for everything. It’s okay to have a weekend retreat of games and fun. Really. And it’s okay to have a weekend of worship and teaching, too. But just as it’s dishonest to call something “outreach” that’s really “inreach,” so it’s dishonest to say we’re going  on a retreat for the study of God’s word when the bulk of the events are games-oriented.

Similarly, I think we as writers need to decide what our primary goal is: Recreation or Theology? (And yes, I know it’s rare to have one to the sole exclusion of the other; I’m suggesting that there will always been an emphasis on one or the other, and that is the important part).

3. What is CBA?

Churches are ministries. Publishing houses are not. A friend and I had this discussion on the subject:

Friend: I think the typical “altar call” conversion is evidence that we have started to view conversion as a single event, and not a new life. And I think the purpose of CBA has become safe recreation. That’s what the publishers are focusing on. I don’t know if that’s actually the original intention. And I think that sticking an altar call in a Christian novel, when it serves no purpose but to meet a quota or to give a happy satisfied feeling, cheapens the grace we’re portraying.  So, you’re suggesting  that while some insist a conversion arc MUST be in a Christian novel,  it doesn’t give anything meaty to the reader?

Me: something like that.  I think if your writing is your outreach ministry, you shouldn’t be in CBA.

Friend: And like I’ve said, if publishers want to be entertainers, that’s fine. It’s their choice. It’s a business, not a ministry. But one of my pet peeves is that I think some people look at buying Christian books as a form of tithing. They’re giving money to a Christian ministry…except that it isn’t.

Me: But they’re not focused on business if they’re trying to evangelize. They’re trying to meld two models together and that won’t work.

Friend: So they shouldn’t pose as, or allow themselves to be labeled as an outreach ministry. And I like that: you can’t meld the two. Christians need to be discipled in a way that non-Christians aren’t ready to handle.

In other words, again: Be honest. It’s not a sin for a Christian businessman to make money. It is a sin for him to try to  pass his business off as something it’s not. Sure, he should be a godly  man of integrity and hopefully not pass up opportunity to speak up. But “do everything as unto the Lord” does not mean “If you tack an altar call at the end, it’s ‘ministry’ and if you don’t it’s ‘common.'” It means, rather, that the CBA writer or publicist must, in all his dealings, strive for excellence, for it is God whom he serves, not man.

Kaci is the co-author of Lunatic and Elyon with New York Times bestselling author Ted Dekker. She's also substitute teacher with a little editing and tutoring sprinkled in for grins. She lurks on Facebook, Twitter, a blog she dubbed Life in the Veil Betwixt the Realms, where she continues to explore the threshold between reality and fiction and everything in between.
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  2. I don’t have a problem with a conversion in the CBA books I read as long as its authentic and a natural flow of the story (sorry, I hate the term “altar call”). I will say people can hate God one moment and then turn to him shortly after. That was me. I hated God. And then I found myself turning to him. To this day I would say God had finally had enough and grabbed me by my shirt and said this way 🙂 Thank God!

    Not everyone one’s conversions look the same. And sometimes when we share the gospel via CBA book, we are showing Christians what the gospel actually looks like (there are a lot of Christians out there who have now idea how to share their faith). Books can give “handles” to concepts Christians know intellectually but don’t know practically. Like grace. Grace is a concept. But by showing grace in a story, you put handles to the concept so people can understand it and go “Ah ha!”

    There are some Christian fiction books out there that did that for me.

    • Kaci Hill says:

      Phrase of convenience, I suppose. Like I said, I don’t really have a problem with them; I just think in literature they can get formulaic, and oft the reasoning behind their inclusion is some form of evangelism tool. That’s mostly why I widened the topic to CBA’s approach to the Non-Christian Reader–it seems to be the bigger issue. And I think writers just have a hard time conveying those things without it sounding like a sermon. It requires such precision.

      Anyway, thanks for the good thoughts – and the alternate response. Having grown up in church and been a Christian most of my life…I could just be jaded. 0=)

  3. Hey! No prob Kaci 🙂
    I know what you mean about some of those conversions being formulaic or forced into the story (read there, seen that lol).

    I agree with Stephen (“And while I’m on it, can we also not have so many stories that endlessly fixate on non-Christian characters, and push them toward making a Leap of Faith? I’d love to see more storytellers showing, not telling, how mature Christians — struggles and all — “best” (if that is a “best”) handle their life crises). I would love to see more of these kinds of books. Instead what I see most of the time are Christians in these novels whose only interaction with God seems to be when something bad is happening and they want rescued.

    • Kaci Hill says:

      If you’re brave, go read the novel “Heavens to Betsy.” 0=) It’s about a female pastor and includes much of the jaded church humor. Hilarious book.

      And you nailed it, amiga.

  4. Galadriel says:

    That’s an interesting question. I think a story can have meaning on multiple levels–for example, the Chronicles of Narnia can be seen by non-believers as an amusing story, by the curious as fable, or with deeper meaning by Christians.
    On the other hand, the difference between Outreach and Inreach should be seen too. My church uses Belong, Believe, Become, as a shorthand for our missions statement: We belong to each other and the community, then believe in Jesus, and become more like him

    • Kaci Hill says:

      Heya! No quarrel there. I try to stay out of the CBA discussions; this was just my general observation after listening to people talk for years. Thanks much!