1. Awww, I was doing so well until we got to dragons. 😉
     
    But as for me, I have to agree that the orphaned outcast who discovers his unlikely parentage (parentage which has become quite likely, in fact, due to the trope’s abuse) is so shopworn I don’t think I can read another book that utilizes the convention. There are many ways to utilize the resonant structure of the hero’s journey without following the formula so exactly that the world ends up with hundreds of versions of the same stories with the names swapped out.
    My unfair shutdown factor is, as weird as this sounds, word repetition…especially if the words being abused are dead weight in any quantity. As far as I’m concerned, large, small, long, tall, looked, dark, and walked are words that have lost any meaning they may have once conveyed by their sloppy usage. In this age where adjectives are maligned with almost as much fervor as are adverbs, an author had better choose the most heart-wrenching adjectives they can find to describe the objects of their prose,  or else leave them out altogether. Maybe I sound overly passionate about this, but it’s the bee in my bonnet this week.
    And I also agree about bad cover art. There’s just no excuse for this. Yes, a good cover costs money. But a poorly photoshopped, hokey cover costs money in the opposite way. Heaven forbid a reader never open your book because they look at the cover and say, “Wow, this looks completely lame.”

  2. My unfair shutdown factor is, as weird as this sounds, word repetition…especially if the words being abused are dead weight in any quantity.

    In Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix, J.K. Rowling used the word “slightly” so often that, while reading it aloud to my wife (her first time, my second reading it) I would almost always intentionally skip over the word slightly.

    Also I recall a lot of “stone steps.” But you do find a lot of those in the Potterverse.

  3. Aaron DeMott says:

    Slavery. It’s been done to death. In almost every fantasy novel, someone either is a slave, gets sold as a slave, gets captured and becomes a slave… and on and on.
    At this point, a book has to be really good to get me to read it despite having a focus on slavery.
    One of my projects I have on the back burner is a comedy/fantasy/steampunk. In it, I’m going to mock a bunch of tropes and such, but I can’t even think of a way to make slavery funny, it’s that boring. (and it’s a shame, as it does illustrate the worst of mankind. Which is probably why everyone uses it….)

    • Sounds more like a complaint about the overdone type of slavery being explored (and presumably condemned). Scripture says that man without Christ is slave to sin, which of course means he will also pass along this “joy,” so we would expect that to be reflected in all good stories. Yet when the reflection is always the same, with the same colors, it’s a dull and familiar reflection. Stories should explore different types of slavery — particularly the spiritaul kind of slavery that comes disguised as “freedom.”

  4. Bainespal says:

    I’ve known a number of lost orphan princes in fantasy, but I’m still willing to forgive them for their author’s sin of cliche.  I don’t think that cliche is actually as completely ubiquitous as a lot of fantasy critics think.  I’m pretty sure that it’s not a requirement in the monomyth outline that too many screenwriters and fantasy novelists adhere to.  Neither Frodo nor Bilbo nor the Pevensie children are lost orphan heroes.  Even Aragorn doesn’t really qualify; Tolkien did something much more interesting with the concept of Aragorn being a “lost” king.
     
    But there certainly are a lot of stories with the premise.  Harry Potter.  The Wheel of Time.  Eragon.  Star Wars.  (Maybe the cliche status of the trope comes from Lucas.)  In some ways, the lost orphan prince is a cheap way for the protagonist to be both a noble hero and a commoner hero at the same time.  However, that lost orphan is not without precedent.  The carpenter Heir of David is essentially a lost orphan prince, after all.

  5. I think a lot of novels “in the tradition of C.S. Lewis” aren’t actually claiming to be that good; I think they’re just attempting, for marketing purposes, to tie themselves to a name with powers of near-universally-positive recognition.  What’s sad about this is that, apparently, Christian spec-fic hasn’t produced anything comparable to the works of Lewis for over fifty years.  I mean … what other Christian-author name is there to slap on the back jacket of your fantasy book?

  6. Margaret says:

    Yes, we all have our personal shut-downs list. From yours, I agree with the dragon theme. It has been drawn out and overdone, and the vampire and zombie themes are nearing the same fate.
    As a fan of YA literature (among others), I will share that I am beyond weary of the whole 17 year-old heroine torn between two love interests, one of whom is always the raven-haired rebel who comes into her life from a place far away and wild, and one of whom is always the blond-haired faithful fellow who’s been in her life since childhood. And the three of them must save the devastated apocalyptic or post-apocalyptic world they’ve inherited from their predecessors, all the while juggling the new-found romantic triangle and trying to decide who to spend a redeemed future with.
    That said, I still have quite a few of these books on my TBR list, so I’m not completely burned out yet. But I will say that my tolerance level for this story line is such that if the writing isn’t skillful enough and the storyline isn’t intriguing enough by page 50, the book ends up in my FAF pile (Forget About Finishing).

    • I am beyond weary of the whole 17 year-old heroine torn between two love interests, one of whom is always the raven-haired rebel who comes into her life from a place far away and wild, and one of whom is always the blond-haired faithful fellow who’s been in her life since childhood.

      So it’s not just (spoiler) The Hunger Games, then? Did Games at least do it first?

      • Margaret says:

        The Hunger Games (which I loved) might have been my first introduction to the theme, so I wasn’t jaded yet. However, I may have overdosed with Matched, Across the Universe, Divergent, Enclave, Legend, and Partials, to name a few (plus all their sequels). I do read other genres concurrently to try to avoid burnout, but still, I think that YA literature could benefit from a new direction. Like, maybe the heroine could be 12 or 25, and maybe the wild boy could be fair-haired and the childhood friend could be brunette, for starters. 😉

  7. Galadriel says:

    Vampires/zombies/werewolves
    must choose between her lovers
    especially if the two are combined. And then I have a whole nother set of drop-tags for  Doctor Who fanfiction, mostly revolving around OCs and Doctor/River shipping.  

  8. Kaci says:

    I think I’ve gotten pickier about *how* the supernatural is conveyed.
     
    Nephilim, aliens, and aliens-as-demons are definitely on the list (Nephilim mostly because I disagree with how the text is traditionally interpreted). 

    Gender-bashing, womanizing (or the mannizing, I suppose, for the female equivalent), slapstick, bathroom humor,  sexual humor;

    “romance arcs” that offer nothing to the story; characters that cannot focus on the problem in front of them (ex: introspection during a high-intensity scene, too much talking during a fight scene, etc; the fake romantic arcs fit here too);

    characters I lose sympathy for; characters who are callous to very real scenarios; neanderthal male leads and shrewish female leads; needlessly rebellious teenagers;

    overuse of foul language (I can tolerate *some* when well-placed); exposition that goes on too long (usually includes a ton of info dump that leaves me not having a clue what the important part is, and my brain immediately skips to the next bit of dialogue;

    stories that devolve into blatant  “let’s bash this religion/philosophy/theology/poltical stance that I don’t agree with” – even if I agree this is a turn off;

    anytime I am saying a line before a character does repeatedly; bad attempts to scare me; manipulating my emotions;

    stories that hop from “real world” to “other world” (I can get over it, but I typically want to skip the “real world” parts); zombies.

    Just…I haven’t seen a good zombie story. I can’t stand mindless drone bad guys who have no actual purpose for what they’re doing.

    Ewoks. Just…no.

    Oddly, I don’t like Tolkien’s Elves. I hear the world “elf” and I kinda just go “No.”
     

    And overly long paragraphs, which means I now am stopping to break my block paragraph up. 0=)

    • Kaci says:

      Addendum: Oddly, I’ll take a good, tried-and-true “cliche” plotline that’s well written and entertaining over….a lot of things.

  9. Literaturelady says:

    Great post!  Some of my pet peeves are:
    1. Warrior women.  Actually, I’ve read only two novels (and a handful of fairy tales) that have them, but the concept is maddening to me.  Just curious: do any of you male readers find these ‘warrior women’ attractive?
    2. Vegetarian elves.  Okay, maybe this isn’t rampant in fantasy, but it annoyed me in Eldest and in a brief scene of The Hobbit movie.
    3. Christian Fiction.  Yep, the whole genre tends to turn me off.  I’ve read at least 26 novels of Christian fiction, and only  nine of them made me excited about me faith (and didn’t induce eye-rolling or a desire to chuck the book across the room.  🙂 )
    4. Book covers with scenes that have nothing to do with the title.  My copy of The Black Cauldron features Eilonwy escaping from a mass of warriors.  It happened, but it doesn’t have much to do with the cauldron.  And the dust jacket for The Fellowship of the Ring features the Shire.  I would have preferred a picture of the Fellowship itself.
    I could probably think of more, but those are some high-ranking annoyances.  🙂
    Blessings,
    Literaturelady
     

    • Kaci says:

      An aside yall can yell at me for, on Christian Fiction….I do have to say that after a year of deciding not to review a book because, honestly, it was horrible, I don’t think anyone is going to convince me Christian Fiction is subpar – writing-wise – to  non-Christian fiction.  (There was plenty of examples in college I could cite, but since I’m not a fan of  “the classics” anyway we’ll just toss those out for the modern examples.)

      • Literaturelady says:

        You’re right; there’s good and bad on both sides…The Last Sin Eater is head and shoulders above the other 25 CF novels I read, but G. A. Henty’s historical fiction novels tend to follow a somewhat boring pattern (boy–usually aged 15 and relative to some general or commander in the given time period–gets involved in the struggle of that period, gains fame for his brave deeds, gets a sidekick, and at the end of the book marries a girl he met earlier in the story).  You have a good point.
         
        But please tell me you liked Fahrenheit 451!  🙂

  10. So… May I take this up a notch and question the purpose of this post? What are you hoping to achieve by listing the things you don’t want to read? Hoping to keep people from writing more of it? Seeking a sense of camaraderie with others of like mind over your pet peeves? A warning to those who might ask you to critique their story?
     
    We all realize, don’t we, that our personal preferences are not indicative of objective reality? Just because I tire of a genre or a trope does not mean it does not delight others. It doesn’t mean that story won’t touch someone with a hint of the Truth. It doesn’t mean it won’t entertain. It simply doesn’t entertain me. 
     
    I enjoy your posts, Stephen, and love how you are always holding things up to the light of scripture. Which is why I want to (with some trepidation in regards to offending you) suggest that meditating on the things that piss us off hardly fits with the admonition of Philippians 4:8:
     
    “Finally, brethren, whatever things are true, whatever things arenoble, whatever things are just, whatever things are pure, whatever things are lovely, whatever things are of good report, if there is any virtue and if there is anything praiseworthy—meditate on these things.”
     
    Overall, while I have a few items that cause me to roll my eyes, there is no storyline that I feel is totally played out or used up. If the story is told well, if the characters engage me, even the most common tropes work. For someone. Somewhere. 🙂
     
    P.S. Of course, this is your blog. Therefore, if you feel like ranting about something, you can. As often as you like. I respect that, too. 

    • Teddi, first a clarification: Speculative Faith is certainly not “my blog.” If we were so inclined we might include a disclaimer at the end of every blog, featured article, news bit, novel review, or library listing: The views expressed here are those of the writer or contributor and not those of Speculative Faith or its management. 😀

      As I’m still sorting out the intent behind this post, and others to follow, I’m grateful for your challenge! (To take offense to it, I think, would be sinful.) Most often I do enjoy discussing more-edifying truths about the Story and stories — such as the Resurrection, a series that should wrap up next week. Yet ever so often something akin to a “rant” comes on, yet rants shouldn’t function solo. That’s why I hope to turn this piece into a series called Constructive Criticism. Unlike almost all my SF columns, this one I hope to address specifically to published and aspiring  authors.

      What are you hoping to achieve by listing the things you don’t want to read? Hoping to keep people from writing more of it?

      That would be helpful. I can understand that secular authors are also derivative and rip off popular stories (and I would defend Christian authors against some charges by pointing this out). Aren’t God’s people, however, called to a higher standard?

      Still, that’s a retroactive deeper reason to support this. If anything it’s a simple discussion starter, and I recognize the limitations and subjective nature of these:

      It’s arguably unfair for me to have these kinds of shutdown standards. With such stigmas, I could miss a great story.

      Or as you said:

      Our personal preferences are not indicative of objective reality[.]

      Absolutely.

      I’ll argue that something like Resurrection was, is, and will be objective reality. But if someone says here, Hey, your “look! dragons!” prohibition is unfair, I welcome it.

      I enjoy your posts, Stephen, and love how you are always holding things up to the light of scripture. Which is why I want to (with some trepidation in regards to offending you) suggest that meditating on the things that piss us off hardly fits with the admonition of Philippians 4:8[.]

      Thanks for your encouragement. I note that Phil. 4:8 neither says whatever is cliched, nor does it warn against meditation on such things. This makes me wonder, though, if indeed there is a Scriptural reason to fault derivative or uncreative work. If in such pursuits Christian subcreators hope to reflect the Creator, what does such work — or a culture of believers that endorses it out of “niceness” — effectively say about Him? If the purpose of stories and their creation is only one of the three Es, to exhort, evangelize, or entertain, the how doesn’t matter as much as the what. But that’s not the purpose of any creative work; like God’s own works, they exist to glorify Him in many different ways — including, but not limited to, the three Es.

      (Speaking of content, I still haven’t figured out if “piss us off” is now acceptable! The vulgarity[?] is after all in the KJV, though not in a slang-term-for anger context.)

      Overall, while I have a few items that cause me to roll my eyes, there is no storyline that I feel is totally played out or used up. If the story is told well, if the characters engage me, even the most common tropes work. For someone. Somewhere. :-)

      Very true! Perhaps what I object to most is what I phrased above as this:

      It’s like saying, “Here is an actual Christian fantasy novel! Very rare in these parts!”

      While I’m no publisher or fantasy editor, I have enough editing experience (or else merely gumption) to try to think like one. And if someone were to come to me and say, Look, I have been writing a (gasp) actual fantasy novel — only Christian!, that is simply not impressive. That seems to be the tack many such aspiring authors take.

    • To riff off your comment, Teddi, I’d like to point out that there really isn’t anything new under the sun. After all, all stories are based at least in part on that story crafted by the Ultimate Storyteller. And though storytelling tropes are neither good nor bad, they are necessary. I think the trouble comes when writers confuse “necessary” with “awesome.” Just ’cause your favoritest fantasy epic ever featured an arduous quest for a magical MacGuffin doesn’t mean your version of said quest will have a similarly transcendant effect on anyone else. Tropes are bones of a skeleton: they give recognizable shape to the structure of a story. But that story can have all its bones in joint and still be emaciated and diseased. Vitality flows from a story’s execution.
       
      I think a lot of speculative writers populate their stories with dragons – or elves, dwarves, wizards, or fairies – because they think dragons are awesome. No, they’re not. In homeostasis, dragons can be just as mundane as any other entity – more so, since they have greater-than-average potential. It’s what they do that makes them awesome, same as any other character. No writer can afford to treat fantasy tropes like magical, awesomeness-imparting gimmicks. Doing so devalues the entire genre.
       
      Never introduce a dragon for its own sake. If it’s not gonna move the story forward, give that golden-goblet-strewn cave a wide berth.

  11. Mir says:

    Bad covers, for certain, but I still read the first paragraph/page, because I was told a long time ago not to judge a book by its cover, even if I really, really, really wanna.
    Dragons, generally, but not an obstacle I cannot overcome.
    If the title/blurb/cover make me think, “Retelling the Jesus/Messiah story in fantasy terms”, I’m outta there.
    Zombie Apocalypse. Vampire romance. Werewolf anything.
    But the truth is that in a good storyteller’s hand, nothing is off the table. I’ll read a book about a Lost Orphaned Prince who Dies to Save his kingdom and comes Back From the Dead to Ride a Dragon into the Climactic Battle, said dragon turns out to be Satan himself, in a cunning plan of upheaval that will require a tetralogy to sort out, and said prince wars against another Orphaned Prince with gigantic Nephilim Mercenaries, while the Zombie Apocalypse looms and Vampires stalk by night AND this time the werewolves sparkle…if it’s really, really imaginative and well-done. The cover would be a non-issue, as I prefer to read on my Kindle Fire these days. But in a perfect world, all SF artwork would be sublime and Mir-cheering.

  12. Kessie says:

    I dislike all of the above except dragons, which I love passionately and can’t get enough of. I think all of the above made it into my tropes list, actually.
     
    i do get tired of Satan as the bad guy. C’mon, there’s a whole stable of principalities and powers out there. There’s room for more than one villain. :-p Right now in YA, the big thing is angels. I’m not quite sick of angels as I am vampires, but give it another year. My hubby and I were writing mortal angels before it was cool.

  13. I have my personal preferences, but I want to avoid shutting down because of certain fantasy tropes. I have made that mistake before–reacting to a book that had “witch” in the title. I was wrong, wrong, completely wrong. And I’ve been an apologist for the Harry Potter books against those who shut down at the mention of wizards, so I don’t think I can justify having my own personal shut down list. 😉

    I tend to think that some of the proliferation of Nephilim stories or lost/orphaned prince stories (I started one of those myself) is a result of writers not reading in their genre. They think they are writing something new and fresh simply because they aren’t reading the latest Christian fantasy.

    But now I want titles. What lost/orphaned prince stories are out there?

    For that matter, from one of the commenters, what stories with slavery are out there?

    Becky

    • I tend to think that some of the proliferation of Nephilim stories or lost/orphaned prince stories (I started one of those myself) is a result of writers not reading in their genre.

      Exactly. In that case, one can’t even accuse writers of being “derivative.” Like my personal example above, they simply come up with the idea, but just don’t know someone already did it. Sure, they might do a better job, but in that case they have a stronger potential marketing emphasis than “hey, guess what, this story exists.”

      They think they are writing something new and fresh simply because they aren’t reading the latest Christian fantasy.

      Sounds like yet another reason for me to stump for the Speculative Faith Library. 🙂

    • Bainespal says:

      But now I want titles. What lost/orphaned prince stories are out there?

      By Darkness Hid and the rest of the Blood of Kings trilogy comes to mind.
       

      For that matter, from one of the commenters, what stories with slavery are out there?

      Bid the Gods Arise comes to mind for me, but that’s not surprising, since I’m currently reading it.

  14. Going off the top of my head, Light of Eidon has the hero get sold into slavery. Is he a slave in A Star Curiously Singing? Bid the Gods Arise is mostly about slavery to various things, as is The Duke’s Handmaid and its sequels.
     
    As for the lost heir/orphan, I know I’ve seen them in the Spec Faith library, but I’ll be darned if I can find them now.

  15. Also, one may throw out the Nephilim as too weird, but giants are observable science. http://s8int.com/giants1.html

    • And I must say that, though it’s a YA book, Frank Peretti’s The Tombs of Anak is one of his best novels.  It doesn’t feature an antediluvian setting or an obsession with demonic intercourse, but it contains giants and quickly turns into a taut thriller laced with genuinely frightening moments.

      • I loved his first four kids’ novels! Well, all except Trapped at the Bottom of the Sea, which I disliked because of the oddball conflict between Lila and Dr. Cooper. Of the new four he wrote later, the only one I loved was The Deadly Curse of Toco Rey, because the flying slugs were so clever.

  16. Mark Carver says:

    I’ve written the first two books in a trilogy set in a world dominated by Satanism, but Satan himself only appears for a couple of lines in the first book. I agree that Satan has become trite and overly-humanized in entertainment (as have demons and angels). I recently finished The Exorcist, and questionable theology aside, it was the most intense spiritual warfare thriller I’ve ever read.
    I’ve never been big into fantasy, since the structures are usually similar (epic quests, hero saves kingdom, average dude becomes hero, dragons, etc). Sci-fi has a bit more room to play around, and it’s nice when the two genres collide (I’m enjoying Bid the Gods Arise right now).
    At the end of the day, people usually know what they’re getting when they pick up a fantasy, horror, or sci-fi book. There are surprises now and then, but stories in these genres work best when they give readers what they want with a few challenging elements sprinkled in for flavor. There doesn’t seem to be much groundbreaking going on these days.

    • I’ve written the first two books in a trilogy set in a world dominated by Satanism, but Satan himself only appears for a couple of lines in the first book.

       
      So, basically, the entire Old Testament world? 😀

      • Mark Carver says:

        Haha, a little more explicit than that, but I draw a lot of parallels with OT descriptions of paganism. Satan doesn’t require that we worship him; he just wants us to not worship God.

  17. Kaci says:

    Yeah, I really think the problem isn’t in being cliche. Most of those are archetypes. I think where we can lose interest is when they’re not executed satisfactorily. 
     

    • I wish more Christians would read/comment on Diana Wynne Jones’s books. Most of her books are MG/YA modern fantasy, often set in an alternate world very close to our own. But she mixes “occult” things in her magic (usually just the word “occult” and sometimes a pentacle).
       
      I’d love to hear Christian reactions to her books. Like the deconstruction of karma in Conrad’s Fate, or the shades-of-gray morality in The Lives of Christopher Chant (which don’t even come clear to the hero until the last couple of chapters). Or even the dealings with supernatural beings in The Merlin Conspiracy or the Dalemark Quartet. Every library I’ve been in has a nice slice of her books. (Most people know her for Howl’s Moving Castle.)
       
      If more Christians tried to emulate her writing, I think we’d see a jump in original ideas. Instead everybody’s writing high fantasy.

  18. Zac Totah says:

    So what if I told you that the fantasy series I’m outlining right now includes a teenage boy who is a prince (he may or may not know it, I’m not decided on that point yet), but the plot of the story isn’t for him to become king? Would that be cliche?

    • Instantly, even though I haven’t seen The Matrix, I see that “meme” image of Morpheus(?) in shades, with the caption, What if I told you …

      the plot of the story isn’t for him to become king?

      Makes it sounds a little different to me. 🙂

      Personally — and again, this is personally, one of those little things that is not an argument, only a casual remark — I’m a bit uninterested in royalty-themed stories or fantasy/medieval settings altogether. But again, that’s just me.

      More firmly I’ve concluded what I said above, which was initially about the C.S. Lewis comparisons, but really should be applied to every fantasy “trope”:

      [S]aying, “Here is an actual Christian fantasy novel! Very rare in these parts!”

      … Does not make for great story marketing. There has to be something genuinely timeless and yet new, and for me, something that goes beyond evangelical tropes (e.g. God loves you no matter what, take that leap of faith, follow your dream, etc.).

      Perhaps Rebecca LuElla Miller up there said it best:

      Some of the proliferation of Nephilim stories or lost/orphaned prince stories […] is a result of writers not reading in their genre. They think they are writing something new and fresh simply because they aren’t reading the latest Christian fantasy.

      And our friend Kaci Hill added well:

      I think where we can lose interest is when they’re not executed satisfactorily.

    • It depends on what he’s prince _of_. The prince of magic? The prince of dragons? The prince of demons? Just because he’s a prince doesn’t mean he has to be that of the tired old monarchy trope.

      • Kaci says:

        Did you read the Star Wars book with a sort of Amazon/tribal matriarchy? Now that was…..weird.
         
        Actually, I think that book made me dislike the concept of matriarchal societies.

  19. Kaci says:

    Prince of the Nephilim!
     
    Actually, I think I’d kinda find that one fun….

What do you think?