1. Lisa says:

    Yes, I agree with you. There is nothing “wrong” with having Christian elements in your book. But they shouldn’t be there just for the sake of being there. They have to have a reason for being there, the reason being driven by the story. In other words, what is driving your story? Is it meant to be thinly veiled evangelism, or is it a story about real people dealing with real events? (of course, “real” in the speculative fiction world has a broad meaning :D).

  2. This is why we have started identifying the spiritual level, both good and bad, in our reviews of Christian speculative fiction. What you just described is level-three, or Christian religious fiction. We also have a level-four for redemptive fiction, and a level-five for spirit-filled fiction.

    In all cases, we need and expect excellent stories where characters just naturally live out their lives in the story. Any Truth exposed simply happens naturally, in passing. For example, in my life I talk to the Lord privately all the time throughout every day. I hear from Him regularly also. His guidance is a natural and essential part of my life. In my technothriller, I have characters who live at that level also. They get insights which are normal for spirit-filled people, but almost incomprehensible to non-believers.

    But the non-believing warriors learn to trust their insights. One of my warriors also uses enemy power [astral projection]. It’s treated in the same manner. Here insights are also relied upon by her team. The different spiritual forces, good or evil, are shown clearly without ever discussing or preaching about them. But in the reviews of the books, I’ve had Christian reviewers question me strongly about including the enemy spiritual activity. (The astral-projecting team leader leads one of the teams for the good guys.)

    The same is true of redemption. If a person comes to know the Lord, in a natural manner, and is born from above. We don’t have to talk about it. All we need to do is show how his or her life is transformed.

    Bible thumpers are completely contra-productive. Preachers are an annoyance outside of a religious setting or a spiritual meeting. All we need to do is get real.

  3. Zach, a thought-provoking article (we must be drinking from the same water or something, since we both wrote about Truth this week). I mostly agree, but I admit, this one line is difficult for me: “Story trumps message.”

    I believe I understand what you’re saying, especially when you went on to say that the message is the foundation that holds the story up. In that regard, I would say the story serves the message. Story shows the truth, but we need to have a truth we want to show.

    I think too many Christian writers have bought into the idea that our worldview will naturally seep into a story. So just because we’re Christians, somehow, without trying to, we’ll show some Christian truth in our story. Well, OK, that’s not impossible, but I don’t think it’s a “best practice” approach to writing.

    Do we say, well, because I’m a human, I don’t really need to work at crafting my characters. They will naturally take on the qualities of a real person because I’m a real person. Again, possibly some writers think that way, but it’s not the best practice.

    So my point is simply this: we work hard to develop a world, craft characters, and structure the plot. Why wouldn’t we work equally hard to embed our theme into the story so that it comes through with power?

    Becky

  4. HG Ferguson says:

    I have to agree with Becky Miller on this one. When I hear phrases like “bible thumpers” and “story trumps message” it smacks to me of let’s just do whatever we want, it’s okay, since we’re Christians that makes whatever we write Christian too. Wrong. There is a great spirit of lawlessness in the world, and it touches this community too. Zachary is right about relativism permeating the world, but lawlessness is beginning to permeate us too as the world draws ever closer to its end, just like God says it will. Story doesn’t trump message, not when there is little to nothing that can be recognized as biblical truth in what we write. This is growing. The question is not and never should be “What if?” but “What do the scripture say?” We cannot for example create a polytheistic universe and honor Him Who said I AM YHWH. Nor can we create a godless sci-fi universe or worse, call the “Force” God. Things like this can never be what if, because the Word of God tells us they won’t be. Story and message are equally important and need to be balanced, but above all must never contradict the Truth as God tells us it is in His everlasting, changeless Word. This may serve ourselves, but it doesn’t serve the God of all Truth.

    • I completely agree, and yet I think it’s fine if a writer wants to create a world in which a segment of society or a particular people group are polytheistic or worship a false god. That’s simply realistic. But the other way—a world in which polytheism is the standard and only way people relate spiritually-p—would present a lie as if it were an actual possibility.

      Becky

  5. “Story trumps message, but like a solid foundation, a compelling message is what upholds the story.” Yes! I got really frustrated years ago when I felt like my stories were becoming formulaically Christian. So I decided to focus on story. Lo and behold, the truth kept showing up in the story because you can’t write a meaningful story without real Meaning showing up. But this time it was natural and not forced.

    We Christian writers can get waaaay too stuck in our own heads over this. Illustrative story:

    I was describing the dilemma of how-do-I-include-truth-without-bashing-people-over-the-head-with-it to my sister and she started laughing. “You’re overthinking it! You’re trying to stuff all the right answers into your story. The main thing is to get them to ask the right QUESTIONS, and then the answers that they seek out will stay with them forever.” (I tell ya, she may be five years my junior, but this girl has the perspective of a 90-year-old.)

What do you think?