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7 Top Ways To Ensure Your Story Is Preachy

You know you want your Christian story to preach. What are the best ways to ensure that outcome? Here are 7 top methods.
| Dec 2, 2014 | 5 comments |

Preacher preachingAuthor Mike Duran posted an essay titled, “The Problem with Message Driven Fiction.” As usual, his post generated a good bit of comments. One of the themes arising in the comments is what makes a story “preachy.” As one commenter put it, no one says they want their story to be preachy. Yet, we find a lot of Christian fiction that is preachy. So it must be a more poplar goal than the commenters were willing to admit.

Therefore, for those authors who do want to write preachy Christian fiction, I thought it would be a great service to list the seven best ways to accomplish that worthy task. After all, without a preacher, how will they hear? So here they are in reverse order.


Ensure you have some perfect Christian characters. All by itself, this does not guarantee preachiness, but without it, you have no one to deliver all those poignant lines of spiritual wisdom. And what is a good Christian story without perfect Christians in them to inspire us to such perfection? Someone needs to be the preacher.


Also ensure you have characters that not only need salvation, but will get it by the end of the story. Preferably in an altar call after hearing a sermon, because they by chance stumbled upon a church and decided for the first time in their life to go in because a street preacher called out a Bible verse and it spoke to him or her. Again, doesn’t ensure preachiness, but without it, the opportunity for preaching gets scarce.


Make sure the characters end up in a church service at some point in the story. What is more natural to preach to the reader than for your character to end up in a service and listen to a sermon that speaks to them? If the church factors into your story, great! Take advantage of that to get a salvation sermon in. If not? I’m sure you can find somewhere to tack that on.


Sprinkle plenty of Bible verses throughout the story. Especially if you have that perfect Christian pastor or friend who can expound on the meaning in those verses, just in case it isn’t clear enough by itself. After all, most Christians don’t go around all day quoting Bible verses, and may not know what they really mean.


Don’t just show, tell. Don’t trust your reader to be smart enough to get what you are attempting to convey in the character’s actions and dialog. Make sure one of the characters or the narrator takes some time to fully explain what the reader should understand from what just happened. So if someone rushes into a burning building and saves an baby from the inferno, don’t forget to tell the reader how that selfless act illustrates how far God’s grace has brought them from the sinner they used to be.


Make sure the plot offers plenty of chances for preaching, either by the perfect Christian or a pastor/evangelist. Remember, plot is to service the message, and that requires getting your characters into situations or discussions where they learn the truth of the Gospel message and other Christian values. Good places to make sure your characters go to are the jail, a bar (but make him/her not like it), the hospital because of some illness or wreck, or a church (see point five above).


And the number one way to ensure your fictional stories are preachy: say every truth you wish to convey at least three times. Every sermon has three point, and the Trinity is three persons. The Bible did it and look how popular it is. The formula is tell, show, and tell.

Do you have other methods to ensure preachiness? Don’t keep them hidden under a bushel, do tell.


This article originally appeared on R. L. Copple’s blog, August, 2011.

As a young teen, R. L. Copple played in his own make-believe world, writing the stories and drawing the art for his own comics while experiencing the worlds of other authors like Tolkien, Lewis, Asimov, and Lester Del Ray. As an adult, after years of writing devotionally, he returned to the passion of his youth in order to combine his fantasy worlds and faith into the reality of the printed page. Since then, his imagination has given birth to The Reality Chronicles trilogy from Splashdown Books, and The Virtual Chronicles series, Ethereal Worlds Anthology, and How to Make an Ebook: Using Free Software from Ethereal Press, along with numerous short stories in various magazines.Learn more about R. L and his work at any of the following:Author Website, Author Blog, or Author Store.

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Jill Richardson

I’d say this applies to pretty much every Christian movie I’ve ever seen as well. It is not an authentic Christian book unless there is a gospel presentation and an altar call, regardless of whether it remotely fits, right? But some publishers agree with that premise. Really, it becomes a lazy shortcut. A well written story preaches the gospel by its story and it characters. It doesn’t need explanation and preaching. But a writer who wants to put the message first and the story second ends up doing neither well. The message is stilted and the story is contrived. Thanks for reminding us.

Matthias M. Hoefler
Matthias M. Hoefler

Entertaining article. I guess for me the question is, “Why is preachy fiction (Christian or not) so pervasive? Why do so many folks put up with an insult to their intelligence?” I went back and watched one of the Terminators (first or second, I don’t remember), and it surprised me how preachy it was. I didn’t remember it being that way.


So why? What besides laziness brings the cows home preaching to the pasture?


(You see what I did there? “Pasture” sounds like “pastor.” In the interest of being preachy, I thought I’d better point that out rather than letting you find it or miss it on your own.)


Maybe the intent is right, but something else is disconnected. We don’t want people to miss the good thing we’ve found.


Even preaching can be preachy, if it runs over the same old points Sunday after Sunday. Like the gospel (and I love it, don’t get me wrong) is the only thing that’s in the Bible. I’m concerned hearing it again and again can numb you to it, which is devastatingly dangerous.


It’d be ambitious but also great to see “A brief history of preachy Christian fiction.”

Tim Frankovich
Tim Frankovich

I have shelves and shelves full of Christian fiction… and the vast majority of these books do not include any of these elements… yet somehow, the entire period in which these books were published is labeled as “preachy” by writers on the internet. I gave up long ago, right around the time I stopped reviewing Christian fiction, because it was a circular argument that I could never win.

“I don’t read Christian fiction because it’s all preachy.”

“What about this one? Or this one? Or this one? Or this one? Or this one?”

“Oh, well, I haven’t read those. They’re Christian fiction and Christian fiction is all preachy.”